It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, scientists and

travelers

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have opportunities to go to far-away natural surroundings like the South Pole. It is

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my opinion that the cons of

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possibility

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more than the pros since it has harmful impacts on the natural

environments

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environment

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and individual life though

traveling

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to these long-distant

places

in terms of seeing and searching new

places

for tourists and scientists can not be overlooked. It will be discussed in detail as follows: The primary disadvantage of going to remote natural

places

is

inevitable

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environmental detriment.

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is to say that since the untouched beauty of these areas is usually appealing to

travelers

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, it could bring

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number

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of visitors and artists from all over the world to visit

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their purpose. Albeit the government can hold the power to take concrete actions to control

this

situation,

such

journey

play

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a crucial role in human manipulation

such

as producing garbages, cutting trees, doing

experiment

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, and polluting air and water.

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, wildlife would be at threat of

damages

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.

Secondly

, distant sites

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a hazard as well. It means that due to inadequate information people run the risk of getting hurt.

For

instance

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people might get attacked by kind of animals which never be warned about.

Consequently

, with these disadvantages, positive points can be overlooked.

conversely

, it is beneficial to tourists owing to having a chance to visit somewhere they have never been before.

Besides

, in

this

condition, scientists are capable of finding and gathering new data in person considering achievement for them. In spite of mentioned positive points, the merits are overshadowed by demerits. Overall, though tourists and

scientific

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scientists

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can travel to remote areas to visit new

places

and accumulate new information, detrimental effects on

such

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area and human-being life

is

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more important