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In many developing countries, there is an increased movement of workers from rural areas in to cities. Why do you think this happens? What problems can this cause?

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The line graph illustrates
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information on how the world
population
 increases between 1800 and 2100, while the bar chart shows
population
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the population
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 in developed and developing
regions
fro
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, 2015 to 2040. Overall, from the line graph, it can be seen that
,
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 the
population
 of the Earth is growing and will continue the growth in the future years, whereas regarding the bar chart it can be clearly seen that figure in developing
regions
 has an upward trend throughout the
period
, while the value of developed
regions
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 the same all over the
period
. With the regard to figures related
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a
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 graph, it may be concluded that the
population
 of the World increased significantly to the present moment, from 1000
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millions
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of
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people
 in 1800 to approximately 7500
millions
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people
 in 2020, which is almost 5700 million more. From 2020 to 2060 the value will remain stable with
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slight growth.
Although
 from 2060 the figure will decrease gradually. Relying on the bar chart it can be seen that the
population
 of developing countries is increased steadily
from
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 2015, where the
population
 made up around 2100
millions
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, and in 2040 there is a prediction of 4000
millions
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of
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people
, which is
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1800
millions
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 more in comparison with the beginning of the
period
. Regarding developed
regions
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 the figure
remain
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 static throughout the
period
 - about 1200 million
of
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people
.
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