You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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The importance of schooling and

education

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is increasing day by day,

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, parents are more concerned about their

child

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’s

education

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and development. Some of them think

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home schooling

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is better and others argue

education

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by going to

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is essential. Even though both methods have benefits, I strongly believe

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school

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is better than

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home schooling

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homeschooling

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Home schooling

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is a type of teaching method in which the

child

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does not want to go to

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, whereas the teachers will come

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apply

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home

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and teach the lessons to improve the

child

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’s

education

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of all, the

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gets more attention due to the one-to-one tutoring method.

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enhances the opportunity

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the

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to give more focus on the weak areas.

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is popular among celebrities and rich

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, because they want to ensure the quality of teaching and secure their

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child

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children

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. In

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way,

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is best for the student to gain expertise in special areas they want

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. On other hand, going to

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is an entirely different experience and it is not only good for the

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but

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the teachers. Primarily, if a

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goes to

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, he could socialise with different children who are coming from different family backgrounds. So that the

child

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gets more chances to mingle with everyone which develops the quality of sharing and caring for others.

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, if one student is not well at maths, he can ask and clear the doubts

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other students. Educating a student from

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and

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debatable

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a debatable

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subject for

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parents. I strongly argue that students

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who are going to

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is always outweigh

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the

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-schooling students.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

282 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

homeschooling
traditional schooling
development
individualized education
flexibility
scheduling
one-on-one attention
learning style
pace
safe and controlled learning environment
practical learning
negative influences
socialization
teamwork skills
diverse perspectives
independence
time management
qualified teachers
specialized resources
extracurricular activities
sense of community
hybrid approach
personality
striking a balance

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