Some people believe studying in a college or university is the best way to prepare for a successful career. Other people prefer to get a job as soon as they leave school and to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinio
Some people argue that studying in a college or university is
the
good option to prepare for a successful Correct article usage
a
career
. Other people believe to acquire a job as soon as they leave school and to advance their career
through work experience. In my opinion, completing the
graduation is most important for our academic Correct article usage
apply
career
, whereas deciding to work is only beneficial in the field of business
.
On the one hand, the
university education is important not only to build our Correct article usage
a
career
path but also
to have a safe and secured
life. Replace the word
secure
Although
by learning a person
can get more knowledge about the field they are pursuing subsequently
, they can grab a reputed job with good income. Eventually, this
makes a person
economically stable in a
society so that they can lead Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
a more
more
happier life. Change the word
apply
For instance
, in metropolitan cities like Bangalore
more than 90% Add a comma
,Bangalore
are
graduated Unnecessary verb
apply
for
a good institution and got a well-paid job.
Change preposition
from
On the other hand
, a person
can acquire more practical knowledge rather than getting a
theoretical knowledge. Taking Correct article usage
apply
for
example, some professions like dancing, singing, painting et Add the comma(s)
,for
cetra
, do not require any graduation. Change the capitalization
Cetra
Moreover
, if a person
having
a family Wrong verb form
has
business
, they can take part in those
Change the determiner
that business
those businesses
business
after school. They do not need any degree because it might be not worthy for
their Change preposition
of
business
. Taking into consideration of most successful entrepreneurs that they
have not finished their studies even though; they are Correct pronoun usage
apply
richest
Change the article
the richest
businessman
in the world.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
firstly
it will be more useful if a person
studying
at university in order to set up their Wrong verb form
studies
career
. Secondly
, if a person
needs to acquire only practical skills, they have an
option to quit their Change the article
the
career
. From my point of view, graduation is most
important part of our life so that a Correct article usage
the most
person
can develop their skill as well as can built
their Change the form of the verb
build
career
path.Submitted by jackjohn0590 on
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