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Given is a table comparing the
oil
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production
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in four African countries namely
Nigeria
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,
Chad
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, Congo Brazaville and Cote
d’lvoire
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d’Ivoire
over a period of 5 years. Overall, the amount of
oil
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production
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in
Nigeria
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,
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was the highest among all during the above-mentioned times.
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, it is noticeable that while
Nigeria
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, Cote
d’lvoire
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d’Ivoire
and
Chad
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saw
a
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growth in
oil
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production
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for most of the period provided, Congo Brazaville saw a reduction in
oil
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production
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for the whole time. In
Nigeria
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, the rate of
oil
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production
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increased from 2,000,000
b
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in 2000 to 2,200,000
b
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in 2004.
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, in 2002,
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rate decreased by 200,000
b
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, from 2,100,000 to 1,900,000.
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, Cote d ‘lvoire had an upward trend in
oil
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production
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from 8000
b
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in 2000 to 45,000
b
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in 2004. But, in 2001, in
this
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country, the amount of
oil
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production
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decreased by 1000
b
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, from 8000 to 7000 . With regard to
Chad
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, there was
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reported
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oil
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production
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until 2003. In 2003, 50,000
b
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oil
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was produced in
Chad
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, and
this
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rate, in 2004, rose significantly to approximately
6-times
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6 times
more than that of
last
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year ( at 290,000
b
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oil
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). Congo
Brazavilla
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Brazzaville
experienced a decline of 75,000
b
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oil
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, from 280,000 in 2000 to 205,000 in 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • robotics
  • automation
  • revolutionized
  • industries 4.0
  • mundane
  • intricate tasks
  • technological advancement
  • accessible
  • efficiency
  • precision
  • economic factors
  • labor costs
  • dependency
  • quality of life
  • creative
  • strategic
  • interpersonal tasks
  • innovation
  • job opportunities
  • job displacement
  • digital divide
  • marginalized
  • environmental impact
  • disposal
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