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Given is a table comparing the
oil
production
 in four African countries namely
Nigeria
,
Chad
, Congo Brazaville and Cote
d’lvoire
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d’Ivoire
 over a period of 5 years. Overall, the amount of
oil
production
 in
Nigeria
,
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 was the highest among all during the above-mentioned times.
Also
, it is noticeable that while
Nigeria
, Cote
d’lvoire
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d’Ivoire
 and
Chad
 saw
a
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growth in
oil
production
 for most of the period provided, Congo Brazaville saw a reduction in
oil
production
 for the whole time. In
Nigeria
, the rate of
oil
production
 increased from 2,000,000
b
 in 2000 to 2,200,000
b
 in 2004.
Nonetheless
, in 2002,
this
 rate decreased by 200,000
b
, from 2,100,000 to 1,900,000.
Likewise
, Cote d ‘lvoire had an upward trend in
oil
production
 from 8000
b
 in 2000 to 45,000
b
 in 2004. But, in 2001, in
this
 country, the amount of
oil
production
 decreased by 1000
b
, from 8000 to 7000 . With regard to
Chad
, there was
not
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 reported
any
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oil
production
 until 2003. In 2003, 50,000
b
oil
 was produced in
Chad
, and
this
 rate, in 2004, rose significantly to approximately
6-times
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6 times
 more than that of
last
 year ( at 290,000
b
oil
). Congo
Brazavilla
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Brazzaville
 experienced a decline of 75,000
b
oil
, from 280,000 in 2000 to 205,000 in 2004.
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  • robotics
  • automation
  • revolutionized
  • industries 4.0
  • mundane
  • intricate tasks
  • technological advancement
  • accessible
  • efficiency
  • precision
  • economic factors
  • labor costs
  • dependency
  • quality of life
  • creative
  • strategic
  • interpersonal tasks
  • innovation
  • job opportunities
  • job displacement
  • digital divide
  • marginalized
  • environmental impact
  • disposal
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