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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree??

#future #people #holiday #country #travel
Travelling is a good source of knowledge it
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 our mind and
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up
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our energy. Some
people
 think that upcoming world
people
are
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mostly like to
travelling
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travel
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 in their own culture and country . I
am totally disagree
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 with their thinking.most
of
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the
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people
 are choosing to go abroad to travelling. Anyway,
this
 essay will discuss some necessary points and
agreed
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 with my statement example
of
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 the following paragraphs below. There is a wide range of
reason
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 why I support it
first
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 of all, In the modern
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world
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 Most
of
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people
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the people
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 are using technology
smart phone
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smartphone
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 and
internet
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the internet
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. They have good knowledge of tourist attraction
place
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places
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. On the available internet, we
are
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know
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now
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 the ticket prices and when companies provide a discount
in
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on
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 the summer packages many Airlines
are give
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are giving
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 up to 30% discount
in
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 their ticket
Consequently
,
that is
 one of the
reason
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people
 are choosing overseas.
For instance
, Thailand, Maldives,
Nepal
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and Nepal
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 are the best of
trousim
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tourism
. Another prominent point is there that,
people
who
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like traditional food and street food. that was the best for those
people
such
 as
,
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Thailand is the best of
there
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their
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 state market and seafood.
Moreover
, many overseas
customer
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customers
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 are visiting
sucha
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such a
 place,
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and ptaya
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ptaya
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pitaya
playa
,
pakut
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and pakut
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 city are
best
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 of
those thing
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. It provided
as
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a number of
reason
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 why I choose Overseas as mentioned earlier. It contains
a
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in
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the
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supply of knowledge and everything who allows you to learn about anything. for visiting many countries we
are
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know
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 about their culture and
growen
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grown
grow
 a lot of
experince
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experience
 there which has useful for our daily life and our job Career.
Furthermore
,
people
 are liking shopping
their
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 number
of
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cheapest
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the cheapest
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 market those which is much cheaper than
my
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in my
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 country.
On the other hand
 in my country. Most
of
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tourist
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the tourist
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place
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places
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 have been crowded.
people
are
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like to go on weekdays and
holiday
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holidays
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. That's why
,
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 most
of
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the
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people
 with their
family
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gathering
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their
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. those
people
 who
have
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spend
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 quality time
They
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are not satisfied with that. In conclusion, on the
basic
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 of
topic
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the topic
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. it can be observed that there
are
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 some number of
reason
 why
people
 choosing Overseas to travelling.
However
, it is
happend
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happened
happen
 for many causes.
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