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some people believe tahat professionals,such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the counrty where they did their training.Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, society has been discussing that the
experts
such
 as doctors and engineers should be obligated to
work
 where they completed their education.
On the other hand
, some
people
 conflict with
this
 idea by saying that the
experts
 should decide
themselves
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in which
country
 they would like to
work
.
This
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both views
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The specialised
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 education
costs
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 highly expensive
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society, especially
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training
of
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 medicine. Because of its cost, some
people
 advocate that if the doctors had their training in a specific
country
, they are obligated to
work
 in that
country
 to pay their load to
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society.
For instance
, in Turkey, the
medicine
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 education is provided by the government without any fees, that’s why after the doctors graduated from their universities, they must
work
 in Turkey
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 least two months if they want to migrate to another
country
; by doing
this
, the governments might be ensured that they have enough numbers of
experts
 in their countries.
In contrast
, some
people
 argue
this
 obligation because if
experts
 will have more resources in
an
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another
country
, they have
a
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freedom to move
another
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to another
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country
,
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this
 way
the
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humanity might discover new things.
For example
, a Turkish doctor called “Aziz Sancar” migrated to the USA for better research equipment, and there he discovered a molecule to solve many diseases.
This
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experts
 may result
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 for
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humanity. From my point of view,
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professionals should be free to live where they want because
this
 freedom might enable them to
work
 without the dreams of
an
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another
country
. In conclusion,
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expert migration might be discussed from different perspectives. In my opinion, the highly-educated
people
 should be able to migrate
any
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country
which
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 they want to live
.
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