In some societies, the number of crime committed by teenager is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment. To what extend do you agree?

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number

of criminal

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that are carried

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teenagers

are being reported in certain communities. It is believed by some

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people

that the punishment for a

crime

should be given irrespective of

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age which dictates giving

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punishment to

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teenagers

as well. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the idea of giving

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punishment to

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teenagers

given the trend of increasing juvenile cases in some localities. In my belief, it is not justified to generalize any observation by just taking a few

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which is the case here that shows

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a higher

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number

of crimes committed by

teenagers

in some communities. Various factors associated with a society

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education index, diversity, laws pertaining to controlled substances and drugs, average per capita income, etc.

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can

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be attributed to the increased

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of

teenagers

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, in a community with very low per

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income and education index, combined with

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laws for drugs, it would be likely for

teenagers

to be forced by dealers to take part in criminal activities

such

as

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distribution of drugs. It is

also

important to take into account the severity of

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punishments which can negatively impact the mental and physical health of

teenagers

while

also

affecting their career prospects including employability in the long run. A young mind can still be instilled with

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morals and values that will guide them in the future.

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of cases where penalties

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as serving a period at a social work organization, mental rehabilitation, and psychotherapy sessions have proven to be effective for

teenagers

. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the idea of giving

adult

penalties to

teenagers

could have a huge negative effect which can worsen the juvenile

crime

statistics of certain societies. It is extremely important to understand the mindset and reasoning of a teenager who committed a

crime

to be able to prescribe a method of penalty in proportion to the

crime

.

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can be one of the best sustainable

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which gives a chance to

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future generations while

also

controlling the situation of

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number

of

teenagers

who carry out

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criminal activity in certain localities.