Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In education nowadays, learning another foreign is compulsory.
Therefore
, I do fully agree that children should be forced to learn a foreign language
In my opinion, knowing only mother
tongue is really unrealistic. Because almost schools now are teaching English or France as another Correct article usage
the mother
language
. Children have to learn it by
all ways even they like Change preposition
in
or
not. Correct pronoun usage
it or
This
is just in case that
they have to use it in a situation in normal life. Not only using in Correct word choice
apply
a
normal life but Remove the article
apply
also
needing to have a degree or qualification for many uses.
In addition
to the concern above, if ones are extremely good at English at school then
they
deserved to have a qualification Correct pronoun usage
one
such
as IELTS, TOEFL,… This
makes getting a job is
easier. More than that, having Unnecessary verb
apply
a
IELTS qualification can help them get a scholarship, which Change the article
an
mean
they can go Change the verb form
means
to
abroad countries. Change preposition
apply
At there
, they must use the Change preposition
There
language
that schools have taught them before.
In conclusion, knowing a foreign language
nowadays has been very popular. For these reasons, I believe forcing children to learn another language
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- however
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- even though
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