In some countries online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is positive or negative development.

It is true that today more and more
people
are making their purchases online rather than visiting physical stores. It affects
people
in many ways. In my opinion, I believe that the disadvantages of online shopping outweigh the advantages.
However
, in
this
essay, I will explore both aspects and present my opinion. On the
one
hand, critics may point out that
one
of the most significant drawbacks of online shopping is that delivery takes longer. Because some online shops only give working days or months depending on the distance and shipping policy.
Also
, secure delivery service. Some items are broken during delivery,
such
as
products
made of glass, some food items and paper
products
. Some of the biggest problems with online shopping are not receiving the items we ordered. Especially, clothes and shoes. Many websites show us very good quality
products
, but they get fake
products
. Sometimes goods are not received. As a good example,
one
day I will buy a rechargeable lamp.
Therefore
, the description sheet stated that the lamp should be charged for 24 hours. I charged for 2 days. But it doesn't work. For
this
reason, some
people
do not like online shopping.
On the other hand
, there are a number of arguments in
favor
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of my position.
One
of the most prominent is that we can find what we like in many stores.
For example
, there are many online shops. So they sell different
products
of the same type. So we can find things as we want. And online shopping is very convenient for our busy life. We can buy things from home. Either we can cancel the order as soon as we want.
Finally
,
although
online shopping can bring more benefits to
people
in modern life.
However
, from my point of view, online shopping has some advantages, which cannot outweigh its disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • remote areas
  • wide range of products
  • broad selection
  • price comparison
  • customer satisfaction
  • value for money
  • impact on local businesses
  • economic diversity
  • job losses
  • environmental implications
  • packaging waste
  • carbon emissions
  • carbon footprint
  • data privacy
  • cybersecurity
  • personal data
  • tactile shopping experience
  • immediate gratification
  • physically examined
  • robust measures
  • consumer information
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