You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend would like to find some quality websites where he/she can read up on what's happening in the world. He/she has written to you asking for some advice. Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter include websites you recommend Say why you recommend them give some other ideas which you think may be useful Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear

Sandiran

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Sandman

, How are you doing? I hope you are all doing well these days. I received your letter that request me a piece of advice about a useful website to know about various events around the world.

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, I like to recommend to you the website that I used for several years named "www.bbc.com". I generally visit

this

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when I have free time during my busy time schedule.

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, I like to say you that

this

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provides official information only around the world about economics, politics, entertainment, sports, disasters, etc.

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, it is a better way to receive the correct details rather than the irresponsible websites and youtube channels which focus on increasing their income through

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by increasing views. And

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, if you are a trader in flatforms like "FOREX" you could gain the prediction ability to select the accurate trade. I'll come to visit your place

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vacation and hope you enjoy it. See you soon. Best regards, Thirupan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

162 words

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