In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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İt is argued that children should go to single-gender

schools

or mixed-sex

schools

. Some people consider that

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in single-sex

schools

have downsides in

children

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life

Although

some opponents highlight that parents ,especially

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have a

doughter

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daughter

, don't agree with the statement because of belief

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, I strongly believe that, going to co-educational

schools

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the

students

later in

life

beneficial

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way. On one hand, Some parents consider mixed-sex

schools

harmful as numerous faith rules are not allowed

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in this

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situation.

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early

ages

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for pupils, having

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close contact is not welcomed

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Muslims which is one of the

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religions in the world.

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, in Turkey, there is a school type which is called 'İmam Hatip

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about

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these stuff

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students

can not

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in the same class.

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, female

students

are going to school in the morning,while males

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the afternoon.

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lead to, both genders don't see each other in school.

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most

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schools

in the world give

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type since having

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communication

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two sex for

students

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advantageous

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for their future

life

. People have to be in touch public

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of looking

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these

schools

adapt

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the pupil to

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real

life

. Mounting evidence concerning

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issue suggests that person who is educated in

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schools

have more conversation

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skills

compared to people who went to single-sex

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, leading

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more chance to get

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in interviews or

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relationship with their colleagues. In conclusion, whether parents should choose single-gender or mixed-gender

schools

remains a controversial issue. I completely claim that going to

latter

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ones have more helpful

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former

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ones as

Co educational

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schools

presents

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more things for

self-development

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the self-development

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of pupils.

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