In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
İt is argued that children should go to single-gender
schools
or mixed-sex Use synonyms
schools
. Some people consider that Use synonyms
educating
in single-sex Replace the word
education
schools
have downsides in Use synonyms
children
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children's
life
. Use synonyms
Although
some opponents highlight that parents ,especially Linking Words
who
have a Correct pronoun usage
those who
doughter
, don't agree with the statement because of belief Correct your spelling
daughter
stuffs
, I strongly believe that, going to co-educational Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
schools
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preparing
the Wrong verb form
prepares
students
later in Use synonyms
life
in Use synonyms
beneficial
way.
On one hand, Some parents consider mixed-sex Change the article
a beneficial
schools
harmful as numerous faith rules are not allowed Use synonyms
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this
situation. Change preposition
in this
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At in
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An
ages
for pupils, having Fix the agreement mistake
age
a
close contact is not welcomed Correct article usage
apply
in
Muslims which is one of the Change preposition
by
famous
religions in the world. Correct quantifier usage
most famous
For example
, in Turkey, there is a school type which is called 'İmam Hatip Linking Words
Schools
'. These Use synonyms
schools
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are
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apply
pay
attention Wrong verb form
paying
about
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to
these stuff
. Change the determiner
this stuff
Therefore
, Linking Words
students
can not Use synonyms
be exist
in the same class. Change the verb form
exist
Moreover
, female Linking Words
students
are going to school in the morning,while males Use synonyms
in
the afternoon. Add a missing verb
do in
This
lead to, both genders don't see each other in school.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
schools
in the world give Use synonyms
co-educational
type since having Correct article usage
a co-educational
in
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apply
a
communication Remove the article
apply
both
two sex for Change preposition
between both
students
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provide
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provides
advantageous
for their future Replace the word
advantages
life
. People have to be in touch public Use synonyms
regarless
of looking Correct your spelling
regardless
sex
. Change preposition
at sex
Thus
these Linking Words
schools
Use synonyms
adapt
the pupil to Correct your spelling
adopt
the
real Correct article usage
apply
life
. Mounting evidence concerning Use synonyms
this
issue suggests that person who is educated in Linking Words
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
schools
have more conversation Use synonyms
skiils
compared to people who went to single-sex Correct your spelling
skills
schools
, leading Use synonyms
they
more chance to get Correct pronoun usage
them
job
in interviews or Add an article
a job
good
relationship with their colleagues.
In conclusion, whether parents should choose single-gender or mixed-gender Add an article
a good
schools
remains a controversial issue. I completely claim that going to Use synonyms
latter
ones have more helpful Correct article usage
the latter
instead
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of
Change preposition
to
former
ones as Correct article usage
the former
Co educational
Add a hyphen
Co-educational
schools
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presents
more things for Change the verb form
present
self-development
of pupils.Correct article usage
the self-development
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