Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some conflicting views regarding whether

job

satisfaction or

job

security

is more important than one other.

This

essay believes

such

judgment is merely just a personal preference and will analyze both sides before deducting my personal opinion. On the one hand, some advocates regard

job

satisfaction as the

first

consideration when hunting for a

job

, compared to

job

security

. Indeed,

although

a constant income cannot be guaranteed, there are quite some people preferring a more challenging and risky career rather than landing a boring

job

.

For instance

, some extreme sports players might not be able to earn a monthly and fixed amount of wages as the frequency and prizes of sports competitions are not stable. Still, the excitement and challenges that

such

careers can offer can not only allow these professionals

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bore

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but

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their sense of fulfilment.

Therefore

,

job

satisfaction is rather important when men and female put more emphasis on the demand for finding a joyment or meeting personal achievement.

On the other hand

, some risk haters do believe

job

security

is the top priority since they do not want their lives to be affected by unstable income. Generally speaking, stable jobs usually refer to a

job

type which can almost provide a constant salary despite

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most external risks.

For example

, the salaries of most servants who worked in the domestic government and public sector, one of the most stable jobs in China, are not being affected or reduced by

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crisis in 2008 at all. Whereas many people who started businesses by themselves or worked for private companies are sacked or even got into heavy debt.

Thus

, it is possible to state beyond doubt that a

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job

can provide us with a sense of

security

and many people value that. To conclude, different choices in covering

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basic needs or achieving personal fulfilment differ in individual's values in aspects.

Therefore

, I believe

this

is a personal choice.