Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some conflicting views regarding whether

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satisfaction or

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security

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is more important than one other.

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essay believes

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judgment is merely just a personal preference and will analyze both sides before deducting my personal opinion. On the one hand, some advocates regard

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satisfaction as the

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consideration when hunting for a

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, compared to

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. Indeed,

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a constant income cannot be guaranteed, there are quite some people preferring a more challenging and risky career rather than landing a boring

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.

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, some extreme sports players might not be able to earn a monthly and fixed amount of wages as the frequency and prizes of sports competitions are not stable. Still, the excitement and challenges that

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careers can offer can not only allow these professionals

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not

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enable them

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their sense of fulfilment.

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,

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satisfaction is rather important when men and female put more emphasis on the demand for finding a joyment or meeting personal achievement.

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, some risk haters do believe

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is the top priority since they do not want their lives to be affected by unstable income. Generally speaking, stable jobs usually refer to a

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type which can almost provide a constant salary despite

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most external risks.

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, the salaries of most servants who worked in the domestic government and public sector, one of the most stable jobs in China, are not being affected or reduced by

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crisis in 2008 at all. Whereas many people who started businesses by themselves or worked for private companies are sacked or even got into heavy debt.

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, it is possible to state beyond doubt that a

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can provide us with a sense of

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and many people value that. To conclude, different choices in covering

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basic needs or achieving personal fulfilment differ in individual's values in aspects.

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, I believe

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is a personal choice.