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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

#spite #advances #agriculture #people #world
The
problem
 of
food
providing
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 throughout the world rises with the increasing
of
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the
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number of people living on the Earth. Not all regions are fully provided with goods, clean water and medicine. A wide range of countries
face
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this
 issue despite the development of the agriculture sector. In my opinion, in order to grow enough
food
 it is necessary to solve a wide range of other problems connected with agriculture. It is required to find more and more fertile soil
with
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growing
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a growing
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 number of people. It is not always possible. As long as the soil is used for farming, it contains
less
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nutriens
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nutrients
 required for growing healthy and huge plants. So in order to grow enough
food
, it is required to solve the soil degradation
problem
. Another unresolved
problem
 is global warming. It influences all areas of living, especially
the
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food
 production. Global warming leads to
drough
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droughts
 or,
on the contrary
, heavy rains and floods. All these issues are able to destroy existing farmings despite the achieved progress.
Moreover
, global warming is not just
unresolved
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 issue. It seems that it become worse day by day because of the constructed plants and
increasing
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 number of vehicles. It means that
the
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global warming and lack of
food
 issues are connected and can not be solved separately. Summing up the considered
problem
, the advances made in agriculture are not enough to solve the hunger
problem
. Only
complex
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 approach and attention from the government to all
sphears
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spheres
 could overcome the lack of
food
 if not in all countries but in the majority of them.
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