In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

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of
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throughout the world rises with the increasing
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number of people living on the Earth. Not all regions are fully provided with goods, clean water and medicine. A wide range of countries
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issue despite the development of the agriculture sector. In my opinion, in order to grow enough
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it is necessary to solve a wide range of other problems connected with agriculture. It is required to find more and more fertile soil
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growing
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number of people. It is not always possible. As long as the soil is used for farming, it contains
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nutriens
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nutrients
required for growing healthy and huge plants. So in order to grow enough
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, it is required to solve the soil degradation
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. Another unresolved
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is global warming. It influences all areas of living, especially
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food
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production. Global warming leads to
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droughts
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, heavy rains and floods. All these issues are able to destroy existing farmings despite the achieved progress.
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, global warming is not just
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issue. It seems that it become worse day by day because of the constructed plants and
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number of vehicles. It means that
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global warming and lack of
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issues are connected and can not be solved separately. Summing up the considered
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, the advances made in agriculture are not enough to solve the hunger
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. Only
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approach and attention from the government to all
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spheres
could overcome the lack of
food
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if not in all countries but in the majority of them.
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