Violence in media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

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Contents that are promoted by media play a significant role in our

society

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. In some cases, broadcasting content

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related to violence promotes these

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of activities in our

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. As far as I’m concerned, cruelty

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have a great impact on the young generations' minds as well as social distancing has increased and humanity is losing. Starting the younger generation, as they pass many more hours by spending several

videos

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on the internet or TV,

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consequently

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they always love to watch movies or serials that contain mysteries, adventures, and robberies. When they watch these

kinds

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videos

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, they imagine themselves as a character in that movie or scene.

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, a school student was recently caught, while he was trying to steal exam papers from his school and later he accepts that he watched various

kinds

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of robbery

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Furthermore

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these types of

videos

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are now controlling the young generations' minds and

this

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brings disaster to their lives.

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, technology makes things much easier and all

people

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society

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are addicted to their smartphones, so they can easily view viral violent content easily. By watching these

videos

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people

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become more self-addicted and humanity inside is becoming lower day by day.

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, nowadays if an individual becomes ill on the road suddenly,

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nobody comes forward to aid him because

people

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think

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might be a trap due to they viewed different

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of ferocity

videos

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based on

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, these

kinds

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of cruelty

videos

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are the main reason for social distancing nowadays, because

people

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get scared after watching them. In conclusion, the ferocity of content promoted by media have a great impact on

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and I agree that it distracted the young generations' mind and

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it is a reason for losing humanity among

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