It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether buy a few expensive
clothes
or lots of cheaper
clothes
.I agree with the opinion that
buy
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a few expensive
clothes
.
Firstly
,there are some
benifits
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benefits
to
buy
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some cheap
clothes
,because
the
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same money that can buy more cheap
clothes
than expensive
clothes
,we can have more
clothes
ranther
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rather
than buy expensive
clothes
.But if we buy expensive
clothes
,we can have
the
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high quality
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clothes
,
the
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clothes
that we can wear
more
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longer than cheaper
clothes
.
Secondly
, expensive
clothes
always have
the
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a
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better
apperance
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appearance
than
the
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cheap
clothes
. I think sometimes we
must
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just
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need some expensive
clothes
to attend
the
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important activities.For
examle
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example
,if you should attend a meeting or have
a
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interview,
the
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better
clothes
will be more adaptive for the meeting.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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