The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The graphs illustrate the country's difference in ownership of electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework in households between 1920 and 2019. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the proportion of having electrical facilities increased continuously and the time of doing housework per week witnessed a downward trend.
Looking at the charts in more detail, we can see the percentage of washing machines rose rapidly from 1920 to 1960 and reached its peak in 1980. In addition
, the other appliances have similar data at the beginning. However
, vacuum cleaners surpass the percentage of washing machines and achieve the task, which everyone had a cleaning helper in 2019. Furthermore
, washing facilities grew slightly from 1920 to 2019. On the other hand
, the time public spent on cleaning was decreasing from 1960. In 2019, everyone spent an average of 10 hours preparing meals or doing the laundry. The graph shows the public pays less time for housework during a span of 9 years.Submitted by yeona030826 on
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