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The plan below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In the given drawing, we can see the present
plan
 of Southwest Airport and the
future
plan
that is
 drawn for redevelopment
next
 year. Here, it is easily noticeable that in
future
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plan
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 the total
area
 of the airport is expanded by installing ten more
gates
 and by adding some more facilities. At present, there are only eight
gates
 for passengers whereas in
future
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plan
total
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the total
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 number of
gates
 are eighteen. By removing the walkways,
that
is
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 present now, we see that the sky train is introduced for the passengers as the
area
 is expanded in the
future
plan
. After getting down from the sky train that starts
from
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between 9 and 10 no.
gates
, we see there has been kept a space for shops at the left corner. The security, passport control and customs are kept unchanged by Shifting the check-in
area
 from
left
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area
 to
middle
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the middle
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 in the place of
cafe
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the cafe
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area
 and the cafe
area
 from
middle
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the middle
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 to
left-down
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the left-down
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 corner and
bag
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 drop is installed in the place of
check-in
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the check-in
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area
. The doors are doubled in the new
plan
. On the right side, There is no facility at present but in
future
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plan
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, a cafe, an ATM centre and car hire facilities are installed for the passengers.
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