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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and five your opinion.

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I
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 is argued that the
informations
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information's
 which
are
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is
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 about
secientific
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scientific
researches
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research
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, business and
academic
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the academic
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 world should be shared freely or in exchange for
money
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.
Although
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people
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 who try to
aquire
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acquire
the
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information
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 put
an
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in an
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 effort, ı strongly believe that
money
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 is not
main
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the main
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 purpose for
people
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 who are searching for
a
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new
data
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. On one hand, some
people
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 state that if someone shares a piece of
information
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, it needs to be
price
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the price
a price
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 for the
information
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becuse
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because
 they
endeavor
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endeavour
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 for
this
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. Info providers dedicate their life
such
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 as giving their
times
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time
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, spending
a lots
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a lot
lots
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 of
money
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, and showing serious exertion.
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,
this
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 process of creating new
information
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 is very hazardous, leading
people
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to supposing
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supposing
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to suppose
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 that it needs to
be value
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be valued
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.
For example
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, certain huge companies
such
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 as Samsung or Apple take
data
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 from other companies to send their advertisements to
the
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customers,
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, others claim that
data
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 providers share out
infos
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info
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 for their ego satisfaction. When they share new
data
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 even if it is free, their names are written
the
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on the
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 top of the platform, which
lead
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leads
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 to
good
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a good
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 feeling compared to taking
money
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In addition
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, if someone wants to use
in
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it
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 somewhere their infos, one needs to add their work in the references.
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, Aziz Sancar, who is one of the most popular scientists in Turkey, found
a significant
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significant information
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information
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 about chemistry which is considered worthy
for
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of
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Nobel
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the Nobel
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 prize and he shared out his project with
the
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Turkish scientists. He did it
free
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for free
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,
however
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, everyone knows that
this
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 info belongs to him. In conclusion, whether
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the accessebility
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accessebility
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accessibility
of
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to
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the
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apply
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informations
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information
pieces of information
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 about certain fields should be free or not remains a
conttroversial
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controversial
 issue. I completely agree, having
a
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prestige is more valuable than having
money
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.

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