Write a letter of apology

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am writing to apologize for

loud

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the loud

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music coming from my house

last

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Saturday night on 28 March. I had a birthday party at my home, and it went

till

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on till

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late

night

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at night

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, and because of the loud

music

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,music

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all my

neighbors

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were disturbed.

This

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day was special for me and my family and friends, so we just had fun. I know it is not a proper way to live in harmony, so I am sorry if I upset you in any way. When I woke up on Sunday morning, I felt awful, because I interrupted your calm . I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and truly ask for your forgiveness. Please accept

this

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box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. We will be

more quiet

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quieter

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time.

Your

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Yours

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sincerely, Paulina Ivanova (Your

neighbor

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)

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Word Count

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A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

142 words

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Write a letter of apology

Word Count

People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused bu this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

.Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?