Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

#town #home #offer

Dear Meena, Hope you and little Charlie are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have booked my tickets for Singapore and would be in your city from 15th

December

to 3rd January. I decided to take

this

month-long vacation as I was too stressed at work and needed a break to unwind.

Also

, a close friend of mine is getting married on the 18th of

December

, and I had promised to attend her wedding. I signed up for a 10-day tour on the outskirts of the city to reconnect with nature from 19th

December

to 2nd January;

however

, I have no accommodation from 15th

December

to 17th

December

. I was wondering if it would be ok if I stayed at your place for

this

time, I would be willing to pay for myself and for all my expenses as well. Please write back to me as soon as possible with your thoughts on the above as I would have to make alternate arrangements if it does not work out for you. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Amanda

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7 paragraphs

188 words

8.50

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children.

Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.