These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, it has become

a

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phenomenal to see lots of people buy

ticksts

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tickets

to go to sporting events, some of them like to see football matches live from the stadiums

instead

of watching from home. In my

opinion

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this

development is a positive thing, in

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essay I will discuss my point of view in more

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.

Firstly

, from an economic view when fans spend money to attend

such

festivals and events, they support the economy by creating more job opportunities in

media

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the media

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and

sport

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field.

For instance

, the ministry of

sport

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and entertainment gets

proption

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proportion

from

tickets

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revenue.

Hence

, it means additional income

resource

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for the national economy.

Secondly

, from a social view, having

this

interest to participate in these events will encourage parents to see their kids in the future like these figures or sports

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.

Therefore

,

this

sentence has been said

from

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parents to their offspring, that we would like to see you a hero in the future.

Moreover

, it creates a sense of joy and happiness in the community, when families go together to participate in any event, they always keep these memories and share emotions with each

others

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.

For example

, there are many groups of youngsters from my

neighborhood

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go

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to attend the weekly football match

to

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the team of our city,

this

gathering makes us feel like one family and get along

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each other. There are lots of examples we can mention here to prove that it is not a matter of spending money on buying absurd things but it is more important for individuals and society. To sum up,

this

development has many positive sides, the positive impacts of

this

issue are clear and we should support

this

development.