Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests animals or clean water What's your opinion.
Nowadays more and more individuals in many countries are not regulating important natural resources
such
as forests
animals
or clean water
. In my opinion
we should avoid these losings.I will put my thoughts into words in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Now many Add a comma
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people
consume water
animals
in useless
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a useless
way
. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
Firstly
they hunt many fruitful animals
and chop many plants
. For example
rabbits
some birds are not for eating. In some Add a comma
,rabbits
countries
most Add a comma
,countries
people
have shortages of water
but many
countries Change preposition
in many
persons
have wasting Replace the word
people
water
in useless
Change the article
a useless
way
. They utilize Fix the agreement mistake
ways
plants
, water
, and forests
for abominable ways such
as collecting . These examples are really deplorable for our nature.
Most people
think that many animals
are need not for our Life. Moreover
they can bite us or harm our skin such
as wild animals
. Common opinions in society show that we apply in
pure drink for our Life even though our necessities Change preposition
apply
such
as washing . Nobody would dispute the fact that we can dwell without Forests
and some plants
.
In conclusion
many Add a comma
,conclusion
people
consider that we can reside without plants
, forests
,and animals
and also
consume them in pointless
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a pointless
way
. In my Fix the agreement mistake
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opinion
everyone should spend them in an Add a comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite