These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, a large number of

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possess their own personal working devices, which makes it easier for them to

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remotely.

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there are both pros and cons to deciding to

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at

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essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why working at

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benefits and some of the challenges to be overcome. One of the main advantages of working at

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is

flexibility

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of time. What I mean by flexibility is that individuals can manage their own working hours better.

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, workers at

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don’t need to guarantee their time in

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once their job is done because there’s no clear schedule when working at

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.

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can help

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and life more balanced.

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, working from distance actually makes it easier to cooperate with others. That might be hard to understand but I’m sure once you try you will feel

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stronger connection. Take me as an example,

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I had to finish a project online with my classmates due to the pandemic. At

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we think it might slow us down because

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difficulty in coordination, but actually we gradually find that ideas are clearer when we try to communicate with others. The asynchronous

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help

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us arrange our thoughts and better document the process. Overall, working at

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can somehow benefits. Turning to the other side of the argument, working at

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make

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hard to concentrate. To be more precise, the

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environment is created to be a place of leisure and

relaxing

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but not to be used for dense scheduled

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.

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without teammates by their sides, it’s easier for workers to lose their concentration when

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interrupted by interruptions, which

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more frequently in the

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situation.

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often leads to a decrease in

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of

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. Another issue is that working at

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for a long time will often depress

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.

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,

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more easily

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feel lonely and helpless while doing their jobs alone. It’s generally approved that during the pandemic more and more

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will face some

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caused by isolation. And working alone with no instant feedback and tangible association with peers is considered the main reason

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it. That not only will affect

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the lack of productivity

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but

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not good for

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’s mental health. All things considered, more

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are familiar with working from distance. You need to weigh up the pros of flexibility and better connection, and the cons of distraction and depression. Personally, I believe there will be some ways developed to help us overcome those disadvantages and benefit more from

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