These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, a large number of
people
possess their own personal working devices, which makes it easier for them to
work
remotely.
However
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there are both pros and cons to deciding to
work
at
home
. In
this
essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why working at
home
benefits and some of the challenges to be overcome. One of the main advantages of working at
home
is
flexibility
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of time. What I mean by flexibility is that individuals can manage their own working hours better.
For instance
, workers at
home
don’t need to guarantee their time in
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once their job is done because there’s no clear schedule when working at
home
.
This
can help
people
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their
work
and life more balanced.
Secondly
, working from distance actually makes it easier to cooperate with others. That might be hard to understand but I’m sure once you try you will feel
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stronger connection. Take me as an example,
once
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I had to finish a project online with my classmates due to the pandemic. At
first
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we think it might slow us down because
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difficulty in coordination, but actually we gradually find that ideas are clearer when we try to communicate with others. The asynchronous
work
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us arrange our thoughts and better document the process. Overall, working at
home
can somehow benefits. Turning to the other side of the argument, working at
home
make
people
hard to concentrate. To be more precise, the
home
environment is created to be a place of leisure and
relaxing
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but not to be used for dense scheduled
work
.
Also
without teammates by their sides, it’s easier for workers to lose their concentration when
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interrupted by interruptions, which
happen
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more frequently in the
home
situation.
This
often leads to a decrease in
efficiency
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of
work
. Another issue is that working at
home
for a long time will often depress
people
.
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,
people
more easily
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feel lonely and helpless while doing their jobs alone. It’s generally approved that during the pandemic more and more
people
will face some
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issue
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caused by isolation. And working alone with no instant feedback and tangible association with peers is considered the main reason
of
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it. That not only will affect
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the lack of productivity
,
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but
also
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not good for
people
’s mental health. All things considered, more
people
are familiar with working from distance. You need to weigh up the pros of flexibility and better connection, and the cons of distraction and depression. Personally, I believe there will be some ways developed to help us overcome those disadvantages and benefit more from
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