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The illustrations compare Grange park on its first day of opening, which was in 1920 and its current structure after development.

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The illustrations compare Grange
park
 on its
first
 day of opening, which was in 1920 and its current structure after development. Overall, the most enormous change that happened after, the
park
’s reconstruction is the demolishing of the
fountain
 and the stage for musicians
also
, the construction of some new facilities, especially the Amphitheatre. It is lucid that
main
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 facility of the Grande
park
use
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 to be
fountain
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a fountain
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 placed in the centre and
stage
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 for musicians, which was built just on the left of
fountain
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. As other, an interesting feature of the
park
 glasshouse was placed on the right side of the south entrance so as result it was facing the Rose
garden
 on the north. Special areas for seats were created on
the
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both sides of two rose gardens on the west of the
park
 and one on the left of
pond
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the pond
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 for water, for
comfort
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 of visitors in 1920 As we can observe from the current plan,
park
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 has gone
under
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 impressive changes starting with
replacement
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the replacement
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 of
fountain
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a fountain
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 with
rose
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a rose
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garden
 and
construction
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the construction
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 of
water
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a water
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 pond for
delight
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the delight
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 of
guests
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the guests
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 of
park
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the park
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. We can claim that
only
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 invariable features of the
park
 throughout almost a century have been
placements
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 of entrances and the
north-west
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 rose
garden
. One of attention seeking development is Amphitheatre while
new
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 café and replacement of seats around the central rose
garden
 can be considered
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marginal changes.
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