Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment. 'Ask about his/her health 'Let him/her know what changes occurred since he/she has been hospitalized 'Also try to make him/her happy in some ways.
Dear or Madam
I am the deputy manager of the company. I am writing
this
letter is
to ask about your health.
Sorry, I should have informed you earlier. But I did not have time. How are you? Are you sick anywhere? You are much better than before. Your Unnecessary verb
apply
colors
Change the spelling
colours
are
very white before. You were very tired. You could not do much. You are much better now. Your Wrong verb form
were
colors
are spot on too. You do not get tired right away. Yes, your health is much better.
We are very much looking forward to seeing you. My colleagues and I miss you very much. Come Change the spelling
colours
quicly
we have news for you. If you come sooner, you will be fine.
Thank you for your Correct your spelling
quickly
Correct your spelling
attention
attantion
Your faithfully.
Jòrayeva ShahloCorrect your spelling
attention
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task response
Ensure that the response fully addresses the task requirements, including asking about the colleague's health, informing them of changes, and attempting to uplift their spirits.
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of the letter lacks coherence and cohesion, leading to a disjointed and unclear flow of ideas. Consider organizing the content in a more coherent and structured manner.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite