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Some people spend a lot of money attend cultural and sports events. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #money #sports #events
There is a trend among
people
 to spend a lot of
money
for
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buying tickets
of
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 sporting
events
 and cultural shows. Some
people
 think that
this
 is a positive development and it should be encouraged Others disagree with that view. Both opinions will be discussed in
this
 essay. On the one hand, I believe that
,
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 there are
the
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things
besides
money
.
Firstly
, it is
a
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damage to individuals.
However
,
people
 are ready to spend a large sum of
money
 to watch their favourite
sport
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 person playing.
Hence
, they try to buy tickets for entering the stadium. But, permits are very expensive.
Moreover
, some
people
 get
a
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money
 from
bank
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 and they did not
to
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pay them on time. More and more individuals like to brag to their friends about purchasing expensive tickets frequently.
In addition
, it is damage to
youngesters
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youngsters
. They only spend cash and waste
of
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time
for
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this
 kind of
events
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.
On the other hand
, it
is
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also
position
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impact
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 on the minds of
people
.
Therefore
,
people
 have a different view that spending
money
 to
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to
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them to
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 go to different sporting or cultural
events
 is not
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a wastage
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wastage
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 of
money
. Nowadays,
people
 do
bot
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not
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 have enough time for relaxing. For
this
 reason, they have
deeple
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deep
depressed
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 and stress due to increased study
peasure
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pleasure
.
However
, individuals can find these sporting and cultural
events
 relaxing and good mood.
Spoting
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Sporting
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events
 and
cultural
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 give more inspiration and motivation to
people
 to do better in their lives.
For instance
, when they see their abilities. It gives a sense of
encouragment
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encouragement
 to them and motivates them to be more fitness freaks like them. In conclusion, there are both sides. It
bring
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 us more energy and motivation to study. Encourage you to
better
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 in your study.
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