There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year.While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.

The table compares the value of a single
coffee
cup in 6 different cities from 2010 to 2014 in Australia. Overall, the
price
of
coffee
in Sydney was higher than in other countries.
In addition
, the
price
of a cup of
coffee
in Melbourne had the most remarkable rise over time.
First
, it cost 2.8
dollars
for a
coffee
drink in Sydney in 2010, and increased by 13.2% in the
next
4 years Melbourne, placed
second
highest for the
coffee
price
in both years, had the most noticeable change of 20.8%, raised to 2.9
dollars
. Brisbane sold 2.25
dollars
for a cup of
coffee
and was the only city with no
price
rise. Since 2010, Perth had increased its
price
by 7.1%, slightly higher than the change in Adelaide. While people in Perth paid 2.25 per
coffee
drink, Adelaide citizens paid 0.25
dollars
less in 2014. During the same period, the cheapest place to get
coffee
was Canberra, at the
price
of only 1.6
dollars
and 1 dollar higher in 2014.
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