Your next-door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

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Dear Sammy, Hope you are doing well. I wanted to meet you in person but did not get a chance due to my crazy work schedule. There is something that I needed to let you know about your dog that barks during the day and the night.

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is not a good sign of a healthy dog, particularly, Shih Tzu which is the happiest and

playful

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breed in

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category. I think you need to see a veterinarian about its continued barking habit.

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is a little troubling for the people in the neighbourhood too. As you are aware most of them are working from home and it would be disturbing for them to work and take office calls if there is prolonged barking. You have always been a good neighbour and share a good bonding with everyone in society and

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the reason people are not approaching you directly despite facing barking issues. I hope you take the puppy to a Vet as soon as possible. If you need the contact details of a good doctor,

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please let me know. Yours faithfully, Bhawna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

next-door neighbour
small dog
barks throughout the day and the night
reason for writing
disrupted
particularly disruptive
polite request
understanding
challenge
consider
specific actions
training the dog
anti-bark collar
seeking advice
vet
dog trainer
possible solutions
manage the situation
keeping the dog indoors
designated play area
pleasant closing
good terms
positive resolution

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