Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

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day and age, the population of patients who are trying different cures and medicines

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of going to their doctors' chamber are booming. Visiting a doctor is time-consuming and

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it is not essential for common ailments like

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and flu.

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, doctors are experts and studied

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how to prevent and diagnose diseases. I found it as a negative development and I will discuss

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essay. On the one hand, general physicians are people who studied medicine at prestigious universities and they have in-depth knowledge about how to control and cure infectious diseases like cholera and flu

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they can prevent ailments

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as diabetes and obesity.

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, they saw lots of patients and people who were suffering from an illness because of that reason they can overcome challenges and hard circumstances in their workplaces and professions.

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, they can reduce the duration of an illness with their prescriptions and tablets, which they give to their patients.

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, some people and residents believe that spending money on visiting doctors is absorbed and

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would waste either their money or their time. But, if you swallow the tablets on your own, sometime you will be poisoned by them and not only you did not cure yourself but

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made your body's health worst.

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action may lead to serious health issues

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as diarrhoea and vomiting. Because the statements which are written below,

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will be a negative and harmful development. By way of conclusion,

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, it is really essential and vitally important to rely on our professionals and experts because they can remedy our hard situations as well as they can.

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, it would be harmful to your physical health, if you had eaten tablets without permission and

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

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Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.