Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

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day and age, the population of patients who are trying different cures and medicines

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of going to their doctors' chamber are booming. Visiting a doctor is time-consuming and

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it is not essential for common ailments like

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and flu.

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, doctors are experts and studied

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how to prevent and diagnose diseases. I found it as a negative development and I will discuss

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it, in

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essay. On the one hand, general physicians are people who studied medicine at prestigious universities and they have in-depth knowledge about how to control and cure infectious diseases like cholera and flu

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they can prevent ailments

such

as diabetes and obesity.

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, they saw lots of patients and people who were suffering from an illness because of that reason they can overcome challenges and hard circumstances in their workplaces and professions.

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, they can reduce the duration of an illness with their prescriptions and tablets, which they give to their patients.

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, some people and residents believe that spending money on visiting doctors is absorbed and

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would waste either their money or their time. But, if you swallow the tablets on your own, sometime you will be poisoned by them and not only you did not cure yourself but

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made your body's health worst.

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action may lead to serious health issues

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as diarrhoea and vomiting. Because the statements which are written below,

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will be a negative and harmful development. By way of conclusion,

firstly

, it is really essential and vitally important to rely on our professionals and experts because they can remedy our hard situations as well as they can.

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, it would be harmful to your physical health, if you had eaten tablets without permission and

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

Your opinion

Some people say that supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell. Others say it is the resposibility of the consumers to avoid such products. Discuss and give your opinion.

Many people believe that having fixed punishments for all crimes is more efficient way to deal with crime. whats your opinion?.

Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What focus do you think influence these decisions? Do we become to use to bad news, and would it be better more good news was reported?