Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

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day and age, the population of patients who are trying different cures and medicines

instead

of going to their doctors' chamber are booming. Visiting a doctor is time-consuming and

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it is not essential for common ailments like

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and flu.

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, doctors are experts and studied

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how to prevent and diagnose diseases. I found it as a negative development and I will discuss

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it, in

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essay. On the one hand, general physicians are people who studied medicine at prestigious universities and they have in-depth knowledge about how to control and cure infectious diseases like cholera and flu

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they can prevent ailments

such

as diabetes and obesity.

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, they saw lots of patients and people who were suffering from an illness because of that reason they can overcome challenges and hard circumstances in their workplaces and professions.

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, they can reduce the duration of an illness with their prescriptions and tablets, which they give to their patients.

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, some people and residents believe that spending money on visiting doctors is absorbed and

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would waste either their money or their time. But, if you swallow the tablets on your own, sometime you will be poisoned by them and not only you did not cure yourself but

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made your body's health worst.

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action may lead to serious health issues

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as diarrhoea and vomiting. Because the statements which are written below,

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will be a negative and harmful development. By way of conclusion,

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, it is really essential and vitally important to rely on our professionals and experts because they can remedy our hard situations as well as they can.

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, it would be harmful to your physical health, if you had eaten tablets without permission and

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

Your opinion

Do the advantages of government spending their money on college and university fees for student outweigh the disadvantage?

Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all humanity. Others take the opposite view and say that money for this type of research is wasted. Discuss these 2 opinions / positions.