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Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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 in today’s contemporary schools
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education is considered one of the major issues. Some individuals believe that teaching
children
 how to behave themselves is a priority of the
teachers
 while others believe that
this
 is the responsibility of
parents
. Personally, I believe that the
first
 priority of
parents
 ought to be teaching their own
children
 and
this
 essay will discuss both viewpoints in a depth. On the one hand,
parents
 should take the
first
 responsibility
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 their
children
 since it is the primary duty of
parents
 to teach them to do and to construct the essential and initial things of life.
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birth to a child, it becomes the
intial
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initial
 responsibility of
parents
 to teach their
children
 to talk, walk, write and
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 of necessary things that they have to be aware of.
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Furthermore
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 the initial education of young generations should be
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taught
thought
 by their
parents
.
On the other hand
, encouraging
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children
 to learn education is
also
 the main priority of public school
teachers
 since
teachers
 are
also
 considered one of the major manner who leads young human beings to be educated and successful person in the future.
Moreover
, there are
also
 other sources
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available
such
 as social media for young mankind that can replace
teachers
 as any kind of data that has to be
tought
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taught
tough
thought
 to
children
 is widely available on the internet.
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 of public schools in
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 allowed their students to utilize the internet
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knowladge
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knowledge
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 the aid of
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social media since it’s
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 suitable and affordable way of learning. To
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recapitulate
, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to
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 conclusion
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that despite the certain ways of getting educated by various sources,
parents
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to be
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 the major aspect of constructing the young generation.
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