Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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in today’s contemporary schools

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education is considered one of the major issues. Some individuals believe that teaching

children

how to behave themselves is a priority of the

teachers

while others believe that

this

is the responsibility of

parents

. Personally, I believe that the

first

priority of

parents

ought to be teaching their own

children

and

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essay will discuss both viewpoints in a depth. On the one hand,

parents

should take the

first

responsibility

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their

children

since it is the primary duty of

parents

to teach them to do and to construct the essential and initial things of life.

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birth to a child, it becomes the

intial

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initial

responsibility of

parents

to teach their

children

to talk, walk, write and

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of necessary things that they have to be aware of.

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the initial education of young generations should be

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taught

thought

by their

parents

.

On the other hand

, encouraging

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children

to learn education is

also

the main priority of public school

teachers

since

teachers

are

also

considered one of the major manner who leads young human beings to be educated and successful person in the future.

Moreover

, there are

also

other sources

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available

such

as social media for young mankind that can replace

teachers

as any kind of data that has to be

tought

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taught

tough

thought

to

children

is widely available on the internet.

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of public schools in

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allowed their students to utilize the internet

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the purpose of getting

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knowledge

by

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the aid of

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social media since it’s

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suitable and affordable way of learning. To

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recapitulate

, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to

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conclusion

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that despite the certain ways of getting educated by various sources,

parents

considered

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to be

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the major aspect of constructing the young generation.