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What is your opinion about the advantages of smoking cigarettes?

#cigarettes
in modern times, the advantages of smoking
cigarettes
 have become an essential part of everyday life. There are those who say that a lot of benefits come from taking
cigarettes
,
however
 others believe that smoking is not good for health. Generally, there are two types of reasons why
people
 believe that smoking should allow in public places,
such
 as gardens, restaurants, cinema halls, parks, etc. Perhaps the main reason why
people
 are in favour of
this
 idea is that
people
 sometimes get obsessed with their working life that time they felt can take a cigarette to reduce stress in their head.
For example
, purchasing
cigarettes
 can heighten government taxes.
secondly
, There are millions of
people
 in every country who smoke daily.
As a result
,
cigarettes
 company are
also
 producing an increasing number.
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