Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views

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claim that

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, especially international ones, bring numerous cultural and economic benefits to the

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where they are organised, while others strongly disagree with

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opinion and consider them harmful.

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I will give my own perspective on the matter. On the one hand,

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events

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held on an international scale attract substantial numbers of tourists and fans who visit the organising

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to support their teams.

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, the figures of visitors to

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,

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recently organised the

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Championship in football, have skyrocketed in the recent month.

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means that thousands of

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not only visited the football stadiums

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saw the most famous sights in

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, went through vibrant cultural experiences and tasted local

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.

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,

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from all over the

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raised their awareness of

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wonderful

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. Another benefit was related to economics. Thousands of visitors spent money on hotels,

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restaurants and

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stadiums.

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meant an upsurge in income for the hospitality and

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industries. And

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profit has already been reinvested in the

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development of the city, which is highly beneficial

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population of

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.

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,

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involve

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of jobs and

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, improve the overall employment rates in the

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. All these are the main reasons to favour

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. On the hand, some

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argue that

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competitions only harm.

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, the higher the crime rates in the organising cities. Another issue is hooliganism, which is fairly perceived as an integral part of football games. Vast examples from the previous

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contests have shown us the detrimental results of intoxicated hooligans’ violent behaviour, which led to demolishing

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and tourism facilities and harming passers-by and hooligans themselves.

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, these two are the main reasons against holding

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. To conclude, regardless of the certain disadvantages related to the increased crime rate, I strongly believe that international

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only benefit the

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that organises them, as they increase the awareness of that

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on

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global scale and bring a number of financial perks.