University lecturers are now able to put their lectures on the Internet for students to read and show the importance of attending face-to-face lectures has been reduced. Do you believe the use of the Internet in formal education is a good idea? What future effects will the Internet have on economic study?

Nowadays, due to the improvement of technology,
students
can learn their studies
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instead
of going to school. In the following essay, I will explain why I believe it is not a good idea to
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and
also
some influences on
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study
. In my opinion, though it is
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convenient and cheaper way to
study
on the internet.
However
, there are some drawbacks that outweigh the benefits.
Firstly
, formal education is better to teach face-to-face. The reason is that there are more interactions between teachers and
students
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courses.
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and answering teachers’ questions will help children to build their confidence and
also
courage.
Furthermore
, the
students
need to expand their own social interactions.
For example
, they can play with their peers and train their teamwork skills
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.
Nevertheless
, if they learn on the internet, they don’t have a chance to spend time with their classmates and will be isolated eventually. When it comes to the impacts on
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study
in the future, if people tend to transfer physical classes
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online ones, the cost will be reduced not only for parents but
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schools.
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learnings are much cheaper than
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physical ones. For parents, the tuition fee will be less expensive and can save
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transportation expenses and that will really reduce their financial pressure. As for the schools, because they don’t need to provide spaces and classrooms to
students
, they can save a lot of rents and maintenance fees. In conclusion, there do have many economic benefits
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improving online courses, whereas the cons might exceed the pros for the
students
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