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Essay topics: The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Although
 many people believe that the
government
 is using lots of
funds
 for some activities
such
 as art, music and movie, it is a waste of money because they don't invest
funds
 in public
services
. I support
this
 statement to a large extent for some reasons. My position is argued
further
 with an explanation. Out of all these reasons, the foremost one is common
services
 is more important rather than art and craft.
This
 music and the movie are not every person's choice but everyone pays the tax. So citizens think that most tax
funds
 are used for the public ,not a particular sector.
Government
 should use that money for some public
services
 like public gardens, schools, libraries, and environmental activities.
For example
, politics should make good schools and provide free education,
moreover
 that school develop same as private schools meanwhile every child take admitted to the school and do something good for the nation.
However
, I would not overlook the other side too.
To begin
 with , art and music are connected to our culture so the
government
 takes some action to preserve them and it is necessary for every nation to do
this
 thing.
Also
, these activities provide job opportunities so
this
 point is not negligible.
Thus
, to conclude the discussion, it can be
finally
 said that political money is not for only some sectors
government
's
first
 priority was the public sector not only a few ounces. I believe
government
 should take some action for
this
 thing is rational.I agree that the authority not solely
funds
 only the public sector, but
also
 focuses on culture-related
services
.
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