Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the usage of artificial intelligence will change our future and have
positive
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impact on
people
's lives
also
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change the whole
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scenario
of our thinking
abilitiy
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ability
abilities
. It is
large
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extent
to
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agree with
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will
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people
's
opinion
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as well.
To begin
with,
IT
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sector is a growing part of
future
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the future
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generation day to day
life style
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lifestyle
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.
First
of all, it
give
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work
opportunities to new employees and
open
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door for them. Now each and every
field
need artificial intelligence in their department, so more
and
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people
have profit who want to make their career in
this
field
. Moving ahead,
this
make
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every
work
a piece of cake for everyone
however
it
need
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special knowledge of
this
field
as well as
work
experience.
In addition
of
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this
, with the help of
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research
work
drastic changes,
moreover
,
people
are more aware now than past.
Likewise
, in
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agricultural
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individuals take
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of
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to
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about
weather
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. In future, it
also
many
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positive
impact
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on
humans
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lives.
However
, it has some
drawback
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drawbacks
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as well not only
make
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human
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humans
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lathargic
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lethargic
but
also
change
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their mindset and the think
out
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of
box
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. And they do not follow the old way of working and their values.
Thereafter
, everyone will make their career in
this
field
and it
increase
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cut throat
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competition and make
sendatry
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secondary
lifestyle of
people
. In a nutshell,
although
artificial intelligence has many positive
effect
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on
humans
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lives but
do
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not
over look
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the
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others
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prospective
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perspective
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as well.
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