You would like to take some time off of work to attend a training course. Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission to attend the course. In your letter • Describe the training course • Say how it will help improve your job performance • Explain how much time you need off and ask for permission

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Dear Samuel, I am writing to you as I want to take some time off due to an event that I am going to visit.

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I am working with computers every day at my job, new programs and technologies must be learned in a short period of time in order for me to stay in touch with the latest trends. Due to

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I decided to take courses that help to get into new applications quickly so I hope my intentions will upgrade my productivity while completing given tasks.

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, the mentioned course will start

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Monday of

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month and end in five days. Due to

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I want to ask for days off that cover the event.

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, I hope it is not a problem to take a whole week off as I truly believe that these studies will develop me as a professional. Thank you in advance for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Daniel

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