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The chart displays the ratio between households in owned and rented
accommodation
 during the period between 1918 and 2011 years in England and Wales. As can be seen on the displayed chart, during almost the whole considered period of time, the value of households renting
accommodation
 was decreasing in comparison with ones owning houses. The highest percentage of
this
 index was observed in 1918. The minimum value was in 2001. The situation is the opposite for families who own houses. During the considered years, their index was increasing. The minimum value was in 1918
while
 the maximum
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 was achieved in 2001. Summing up the data displayed in the chat, it can be seen that the dynamic of both values ​​is opposite to each other. Only in 1971 their indexes were on the same level and were 50
percent
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. Before
this
 moment, the percentage of households renting
accommodation
 was higher than the ones owning
accommodation
.
After
this
 moment, the situation changed in the opposite way.
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