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A large amount of advertisements nowadays are targeted at children. Many people say these have negative effects on children and should therefore be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, Issues relating to unpaid
community
 services are commonly discussed. Some people think that it is important to promote these acts to provide positive effects. I personally believe
such
 gestures help
children
, and
society
 to empathise with an underprivileged section of
society
.
Therefore
, they should not be restricted at all. There are multiple reasons why unpaid
community
 service should be increased, it provides harmony,
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and
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loving
cares
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care
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 for each other.
Firstly
, it balances the
community
 as a whole.
For example
,in a higher
society
 school
children
 should help poor
children
 with free stationery, and food and should donate old books.
This
 will help build soft skills in
children
.
Moreover
, a few intelligent
children
 should run a weekly camp wherein they can have free classes for poor
children
 about basic hygiene, education and vocabulary.
On the other hand
, unpaid
community
 work may lead to several drawbacks, Students in class 10th or 12th may indulge in these activities more and may lose their concentration
then
 leading to poor marks on boards.
In addition
, they may lie to their parents to ask for some money to help the lower class of
society
 and in return spend that money in clubs or restaurants.
Therefore
, careful behaviour is needed when helping the
community
. In conclusion, sympathising and empathising with each other to get a real idea about what life situations are in each category of the class will lead to living in a better world. In my personal opinion donating blankets in winter, food to stray animals and birds or donating old clothes to the needful will help each other grow as a whole.
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