Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Reported 2017, Academic Test)

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I was born on 24 May 2006 in Moscow, and I am sixteen now. I do not have native brothers or sisters. My parents gave me everything for a happy childhood. As for my parents, my mother helps to find people job. Father makes projects for oil companies. Before school I went to kindergarten. Today I study in the ten grades in state school. My ratings are good. I do all homework. My passion is sport. I do sports with seven years. I did badminton, basketball, wrestling, swimming and even breakdance. Now, I regularly visit gym and play volleyball or sometimes football. When I locate at school, I play table tennis on breaks.
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, I adore to follow for football. I watch matches and results.
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, I read a self-development books.
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: I read Arnold Schwarzenegger biography, Maria Sharapova biography and Genius regime. At leisure I watch films, listen to music. My favourite actor is Dwayne Johnson and film Gridiron Gang with him. I learn English via the films and music. I worship to watch videos via YouTube. Especially, videos about history, sport, politics. In summer I ride in Izhevsk to relatives. There is silence. There I live in village so far ate city.
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, I ride in Smolensk to other relatives. My cousins live there. By the way, I travelled with parents so much.
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: I was in Turkey, Germany, Italy, Spain, Austria, Portugal, Belarus, UAE, Egypt, Greece, Hungary.
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, I know English so-so, but I learn. I listen to speeches or music in English, watch movies in original, read a books, study with cool tutor. As for my future, I am going to visit United Kingdom and USA. I plan to attain results in sport, make money, get happiness. About profession, I think yet, but stick economist.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental degradation
  • curb
  • disproportionately
  • alternative energy sources
  • economic strain
  • sustainable projects
  • illegal activities
  • smuggling
  • black market
  • comprehensive policies
  • public awareness
  • conservation
  • unilateral measures
  • international cooperation
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