Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the twentieth one centuries,

Smartphones

play a huge contribution in our daily lives. Due to the fact that today they are easy to access and multifunctional for many people,

smartphones

like iPhones and Androids became undetachable from our daily lives which widely affects people, including

children

. As it appears,

children

spend hours on

smartphones

.

This

essay will the possible reasons regarding

this

matter; why it is the way it is and whether it is a benefit for

children

or not. Due to various reasons, there are situations where

children

usually overuse their

smartphones

;

Firstly

, perhaps it is because of the lack of public spaces where

children

including teenagers could go and have some fun.

Therefore

, they would rather stay at home and engage in a simulation of public space inside their phones

such

as social media.

Secondly

, in the present day, there is a case that both parents have to work really hard in order to provide for their

children

, So, they might not have time for them.

Instead

, they believe if the

children

are accompanied by their Hitech phones, they might be not so much lonely. In my opinion,

this

overuse of telephones

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among

children

does not provide any positive development,

In contrast

, it would rather be negative effects on the younger generation.

For example

, They might have not developed the area of real-life socializing, due to the fact that they are on the phone all the time. Or, younger people could have

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serious mental health

problem

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such

as depression, etc. To conclude, more

children

spend time on these kinds of devices in these modern times, and it is mainly because of people’s living areas and parents’ overworking situations. In my opinion, it primarily affects

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the mental health of

children

, etc.