Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a diﬀerence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In contemporary society, there is a contentious argument that who is responsible

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care of

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Earth. The popular belief is that people cannot do anything to protect nature,

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, rulers and multi-national enterprises are responsible for it. I totally disagree with the statement. The subsequent paragraphs will explain the reason why I reject the above-mentioned notion.

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with, each and every human has a crucial role

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our surroundings as individuals are the key component of society. The questions are what is the role of each of us and how can we execute the process?

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, growing plants is one of the main things that people can do for

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nature. Each person can plant some trees yearly. Let us choose our plantation or the roadside to do it.

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, parents and school authorities can give awareness programs to the young generation regarding the importance of planting and

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the protection of nature.

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, by growing plants on

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earth day

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and so on.

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, another way to take care of our backgrounds is

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them. All people should use the bins. By bringing

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into practice, we can save the lives of many animals and trees.

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, reduce the use of plastics and reuse and recycle the things

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of throwing them after a single use. A good example is

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if everyone uses cloth bags as an alternative to plastic bags, that will

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major positive initiation that protects the vegetation.

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, all that the public can do at home is reduce the wastage of water and electricity. In conclusion, because of methods like reducing the cutting of trees and replenishing them, lessening the consumption of natural resources,

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scientific methods for the proper disposal of waste, I believe society can do lots of things to save our surroundings.

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The essay addresses the prompt but lacks elaboration and development of ideas. The main points are relevant but need further explanation and supporting details.

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The essay shows a consistent overall progression of ideas and uses a variety of cohesive devices, but there are some issues with coherence due to lack of elaboration and support for the main points.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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4 paragraphs

309 words

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