Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is argued that professional
athletes
can make more money
than than
other Remove the redundancy
apply
jobs
. Therefore
some people
think it is not fair, others state this
is right. Although
it seems like, it is very easy what sports professionals do, they adjust their whole life for
their occupation.
On Change preposition
to
one
hand, one
highlights that athletes
have more income than the
other Correct article usage
apply
jobs
and one
says it is a situation which is not deserved. It sounds fully exaggerating
, you just play a game and you get millions of Replace the word
exaggerated
dolars
, leading to Correct your spelling
dollars
people
consider
Wrong verb form
considering
this
amount of money
is not fair. For example
, business men
Correct your spelling
businessmen
graduated
Wrong verb form
graduate
a
high-level university and Change preposition
from a
working
Wrong verb form
worked
hardly
, Replace the word
hard
however
, at the end of the day Messi who is the greatest of all time football
player, Change preposition
in football
earn
Correct subject-verb agreement
earns
money
,which business men
make in a year, in a match. To sum up, Correct your spelling
businessmen
people
claim that there is no right balance between athletes
and other Change noun form
athletes'
athlete's
jobs
incomes.
Change noun form
jobs'
job's
On the other hand
, when public
Correct article usage
the public
watch
a Change the verb form
watches
sport
game, they just see the Change the noun form
sports
athletes
one
hour of their lives, yet professionals dedicate their whole life Change preposition
for one
for
a just Change preposition
to
one hour
performance. They everyday get up early, practice twice a day, and eat Add a hyphen
one-hour
healty
food not what they want to eat. Correct your spelling
healthy
In addition
, even they sacrifice seeing their families, leading to also
very
low possibility to manage their mental health. Add an article
the very
a very
For instance
, Stephen Curry who is the best shooter in NBA
league has a tight diet and Correct article usage
the NBA
practice
three times Correct subject-verb agreement
practices
in
a day. In an interview he said, ı could not see my daughter for two weeks before the Change preposition
apply
last
final match so ıt
was worse than training all night. Correct your spelling
it
Thus
, being a professional is not piece of cake as other see.
In conclusion, whether successful athlete
Fix the agreement mistake
athletes
earn
more Change the verb form
earns
money
than other jobs
is fair or not remains a controversial issue. Although
people
supposed being a football or basketball player is simple, ıt
was Correct your spelling
it
difficult
in terms of mental and physical health than they thought. I strongly believe that society must be Correct quantifier usage
more difficult
respectfull
to Correct your spelling
respectful
athletes
incomes.Change noun form
athletes'
athlete's
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