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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays,
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 sector is growing day by day with a lot of advancements despite numerous
people
 across all the
nations
have
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 to face
hunger
 in large amounts. So, in the forthcoming, paragraphs I will discuss why
this
 problem is faced by a large number of
individuals
 and apart from that, what can be done to solve these issues. On the one hand,
people
 around the world still go hungry despite the advances in farming because only a few
persons
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 are currently engaged in farming.
Firstly
, less farming can result in low
food
 production due to which the prices of basic products will increase
such
 as milk, sugar, wheat flour and pulses as well.
Moreover
, the increasing prices of products cannot be afforded by every single person.
Therefore
, despite development in farming
people
 have to live with
hunger
 because of their financial condition.
On the other hand
, governments can come up with various schemes and education to encourage agriculture around the globe.
Firstly
, the
government
 can start educating
individuals
 through different seminars and TV advertisements to show the importance of farming, without agricultural activities one cannot survive for a long period of time.
Therefore
, the
government
 can encourage
individuals
 by giving incentives which
people
 may start to opt for farming as their profession.
Furthermore
, all
nations
 around the world must impose huge penalties on
individuals
 who waste
food
.
However
, some countries have already started doing
this
 ,
for example
, if a person wastes
food
, he/she has to pay a penalty to which
government
 says to
people
 that they are paying for the
food
 ,not for the country's resources.
Therefore
, imposing large amounts of penalty for the waste of
food
 is a way by which different
nations
 can control
people
's
hunger
. To conclude, fewer
people
 do agricultural activities is one of the reasons for
hunger
 around the world.
Moreover
,
nations
 can encourage
people
 to engage in farming by giving incentives.
Also
, the
government
 can impose a high penalty on
individuals
 who waste
food
 due to which numerous persons have to sleep hungry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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