Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, the biggest issue is illness and

diseases

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. Some believe that the most efficient solution to handle

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problem is that environmental pollution and housing

problems

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should be reduced by the authority by taking some string measures. In my opinion, these solutions would be helpful to prevent

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.

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of all, reducing the environmental crisis prevents the formation of new micro-bacteria that harm the human body. In the other words, germs are the cause of disease so paying more attention to providing vanishing microbes is a priority.

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, people who live in Bursa suffer from respiratory illness because rubbish which is randomly thrown from factories led to air pollution.

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, most of them have asthma.

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, solving environmental

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is an efficient solution to prevent some sicknesses.

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, suburban areas are a hotbed of germs so the authority should reduce housing

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. People living in these areas are prone to be sick because inner cities are crowded.

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, some

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can easily spread.

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, according to the Health Magazine surveys, people who live in Yıldırım which is the most ghetto neighbourhood of Bursa have various health

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due to low shelter conditions.

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, house planning and urban regeneration can be suggested as a solution. To conclude, reducing environmental pollution and housing

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is one of the solutions to eradicate

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. Naturally,the authority should pursue

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policy.

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, it is predictable that if the government do not take measures for environmental crisis and housing

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the number of sicknesses will increase over time.