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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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A number of parents buy their children as many toys as they wish .
This
 action might have many outcomes some of them have satisfactory but it
also
 comes with damage. When you purchase any game for your baby it gives them confidence and they do not get disappointed or obsessive about that plaything, therefor they do not get unhappy once they see their friends playing with the toys that he or she does not have. It not only makes them thankful but
also
 generous, for entrance my nephew shares his playthings with other kids. In ,contrast
this
 idea makes children spoiled and you can not control them anymore. Once you listen to everything they say and get everything they ask for you lose the game, and if you do not buy them whatever they wish for they will start to cry hard and scream loudly in order to achieve their desires. The statistics show that 78% of
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 will get depressed in their teenagehood because of course that not everyone will listen to them and they can not receive what they want easily and by crying. For
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 they become depressed. As an example my father used to accept all my requests as a child, it was very sweet and pleasant for me as a kid but when I grew up a bit my problems started, l could not contact my school teachers so I started skipping school, The older I got my problems got bigger and bigger, for
this
 ,reason my migraine attacks started happening when I was only 11
additionally
 I became depressed . To conclude
consequently
this
 idea has some wrong and right results. The advantage that I discussed was that
this
 action makes your baby more confident, humble
moreover
 happy,
on the other hand
 for disadvantage the  act mentioned in the topic makes them overindulged and it has very bad consequences
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