Animals are becoming exist due to human activities on land and in sea. Why has this happen? What’s the solution?
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animals
increasing their extinction on the planet. This
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disruption
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disruption
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disruption
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,countries
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the ocean
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animals
. For example
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machines which caused deforestation. Add a hyphen
tree-cutting
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killing
animals
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disruption
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the listed
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for
dwindling
numbers of Correct article usage
the dwindling
animals
.
There are many principal solutions for this
trend. Firstly
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on
people
who do not obey it and against this
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rights
people
could save many endangered species and boost their number in wildlife again . Moreover
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the introduction
animals
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temperature
and unsuited living conditions.
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temperatures
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of habitat and hunting illegally alongside food chain Replace the word
loss
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disruption
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disruption
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origins of Correct article usage
the main
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