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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

#computer #effects #children
Many people think that youngsters who use a computer on a daily basis can have negative effects rather than positive ones. While I personally agree with
this
 point of view, I believe that some benefits of
computers
 are still useful. In my opinion, children can become addicted to
computers
 if they
overuse
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.
In other words
, many
childrens
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children
children's
 glue on the screen for hours on end because
computers
 are equipped with novel technology, visual effects on video games,etc.
As a result
, they can suffer from health factors
such
 as
eyes
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 and bones.
For example
, there are more young people who get short-sighted at an early age.
Furthermore
,
computers
 can discourage them from interacting with society. It could be explained by the fact that
childrens
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children
children's
 tend to chat or make new relationships with others via social platforms,
it
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which
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 can lead them
in
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to
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 a dark lonely life which no one wants to see or suffer from.
Finally
, if teenagers search for poisonous information without parental duty, they can change their
mind
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minds
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 in negative ways.
However
, using the computer in a wise way can be enormously beneficial for them as long as they are used for educational or
researching
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 purposes. A good example
for
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of
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this
 case is that
computers
 can hold a wide range of information if teenagers consume these in exploring something creative and unusual, and can make them knowledgeable at a later stage of their careers. In conclusion,
computers
 have more negative aspects than positive ones,
although
it
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they
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 can have positive effects on
childrens
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children
children's
 if they know how to use them correctly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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