Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime?

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juvenile crimes committed by youngsters are becoming one of the main factors of increasing crime rate. Three main causes are appearing to be associated with juveniles engaging in delinquent acts, and

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essay will examine possible solutions that could be adjusted. Perhaps the major

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deriving from

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influence, as most young people spend most of their time in

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activities as their friends they associate with, in general, they want to fit in and to be accepted by their friend

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led to succumbing

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pressure. Following

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issue is contributed with having a lack of education. Education will provide them with

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mental framework, and

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it is been stated that

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it is a key foundation for success. Individuals who do not take education as crucial

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in life

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tends

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to be ignorant towards other aspects of life, and

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may lead them to participate in criminal offences. Turning to possible solutions, a key solution to resolve

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issue is to carry out

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providing information; for parents on how to raise their children,

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their children’s emotions and

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. For youths,

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could assist with

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that their actions come with consequences.

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, parents should give their children an opportunity to take part in a community group,

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as scouts and volunteer

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a supportive social environment. In conclusion, the problems are most likely caused by

peer

groups

and negligent parents, and the solution to

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requires providing them with an educational program.