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Grace is sitting in the living room and playing with the toys. She uses

pincer

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a pincer

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grasp to pick up a mermaid

toy

with her

right

hand

and pets a mermaid’s hair with her left

hand

. She says, “

This

mom

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a mom

the mom

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and her name is Arial” by grabbing

this

toy

with her

right

hand

again. She uses non-locomotor

skill

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skills

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by twisting her waist to pick up an astronaut

toy

using

palmer

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a palmer

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grasp with her left

hand

. She holds a mermaid

toy

with her

right

hand

and an astronaut

toy

with her left

hand

by saying “Mom and Dad”. She uses

palmer

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a palmer

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grasp to put down these two toys on the floor.

Then

she uses

pincer

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a pincer

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grasp to pick up a small

girl

toy

with her left

hand

and says, “My sister” and “She is 5 and I am

also

5 too”. She tells a

girl

toy

“Look! there is a Christmas tree in our house”. She picks up the purple dress in the

toy

box

with her left thumb and

index

finger

by saying, “It’s small”. She puts down

this

purple dress into the

toy

box

and picks up the small

glasses

with the left thumb and

index

finger

as well as uses

palmer

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a palmer

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grasp to hold the small

girl

toy

with her

right

hand

. She wears the

glasses

on the face of the small

girl

toy

and says, “These

glasses

are small”. She puts the small

girl

with

glasses

to her. She uses

palmer

Correct article usage

a palmer

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grasp to take one of the mouse toys from the

toy

box

with her

right

hand

and

then

picks another mouse with her left

hand

by saying “Grandmother because she is sitting in the wheelchair”. She uses

palmer

Correct article usage

a palmer

show examples

grasp to pick up a

bicycle

toy

with her left

hand

but holds it in her

right

hand

. She looks into the

toy

box

by saying “Where is she?” and uses

palmer

Correct article usage

a palmer

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grasp to pick up a barbie doll with her left

hand

then

put the

bicycle

toy

between the barbie’s

legs

. She takes out the

bicycle

between the barbie’s

legs

by saying with a smile “She is big and throws the barbie doll into the

box

with her left

hand

. She holds the

bicycle

between her

right

thumb and three fingers (without touching her

index

finger

) by turning around the

bicycle

with her left

index

finger

Then

she puts it on the floor and moves the

bicycle

back and forth by holding the

bicycle

’s seat with her

right

hand

. She uses

palmer

Correct article usage

a palmer

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grasp to take out the mouse from the

toy

box

and says “His

legs

are small” by using

pincer

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a pincer

show examples

grasp to touch a mouse’s

legs

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

441 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Today, more and more students are choosing to move to other countries to have higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

Include an introduction and conclusion

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should pay for the cost. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people use new forms of technology to communicate these days. What are the positive effects of the student on personal and professional relationships? Could online forms of communication lead to superficial connections?

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.